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Payback for Play Coins (Oneshot)

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  Luno had to be steaming mad. He'd let Luna borrow his 3DS to play Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds, but she used almost half of his Play Coins on Hint Ghosts throughout the game on her profile! You would expect him to be pretty angry at his little sister. But he had a better idea. He grabbed a fur brush, a never-used electric toothbrush, (I hope it belonged to Shade. XD) and a small bottle of TickleX, and went to find Luna. And sure enough, she was already in her room, writing in her diary.

  Luno snuck up on the kitten, grabbed her ankles, (making her gasp,) and held them close to his chest.

  "Luno, w-what are you doing!?" Luna asked in surprise.

  "Giving you what you deserve," Luno smirked before rubbing a palmful of TickleX onto her soles, then all around her toes, and up and down her arches.

  "W-what do you mean?" Luna asked, trying not to giggle, "What are you doing this for?"

  "I'm sure you remember," Luno said, "You must've had a lot of time to spare talking to those Hint Ghosts, huh?"

  When Luno said that last part, Luna swallowed hard. Oh, the Play Coins, she thought in regret. After that, Luno bared his claws (not the wolverine ones, the fingernail ones) and scratched and stroked them all over Luna's sensitive soles up, down, and sideways. Laughter spilt out of Luna as she curled her toes by reflex. She tried to take her feet back, but Luno was much too strong for her own giggly good. Luno traced one or two claws under her toes on each foot, making her yelp and cackle. The under-toes are a very sensitive spot on the feet.

  Next, Luno stopped for a moment, but it was barely a minute when he got out the hair brush. Luna introduced that tickle tool to Luno months ago, and has partially regretted it ever since. But overall, she adores it even more. Luno began scrubbing Luna's soles and arches, sending her into hysterical laughter. Luna squealed and cackled, squirming on the bed like a worm with a massive case of the giggles.

  "Hold still, Luna," Luno said playfully, "I know how much you love what's coming up after this. It helps me get between your toes better." He winked.

  "Wahahahait!" Luna laughed, but Luno interrupted her.

  "Be a good girl and you'll get that thing you love," He convinced.

  Luna obviously knew what he was talking about. Luna loved having her feet tickled by an electric toothbrush! It was a great tool for teasing while tickling, which is just part of what Luna loved about it. After almost five minutes of hairbrush-tickles, Luno gave Luna a few minutes to catch her breath as he grabbed the toothbrush. The grey cat turned to his little sister, who was laying her head on a pillow with a sweet smile.

  "I take it you're enjoying this?" He smirked.

  "I'll love the next part," the kitten giggled.

  With that being said, Luno flicked the toothbrush on, triggering the spinning bristles and vibrating function, and stroked it up and down her soles and arches. Luna just lost it! She squealed and burst into adorable laughter as the toothbrush made it's way around her feet and toes. Her older brother knew he would probably get tickled to death by his sister after this, but it was worth it! Luno brought the bristles under her toes, and Luna was almost in silent laughter.

  "Now, hold still," Luno told Luna as he started stroking the toothbrush in a swiveling motion from her heel on up, slowly, "Goooing up..." He reached her sole and swirled his "tool" around in circles. "Swiiirlyyy~..."

  Luna simply laid there, laughing very cutely while she got butterflies in her tummy from the charming tease.

  "And aaalll the waaayy up to the top," Luno cooed as he trailed the bristles up and down under her toes, "Good girl~! Now the other one." He imitated the same motions and tease from the first foot as Luna's tummy butterflies increased. After that, Luno simply scrubbed circles on Luna's arches and soles, weaving the brush between her toes, and stroking the tops of her feet, which tickled like crazy! The kitten was helpless in laughter, but she enjoyed it. And I'm sure her sibling did too.

  "I hope you've learned your lesson after this," Luno chuckled, "I suppose now you'll think twice about using up all my Play Coins?"

  "Yehehehehess!" Luna struggled to answer between laughs, "I swehehehehehehear!!"

  "Okay then," Luno purred, but then smirked, "Buuut... Just to be sure..." With that, he gave her soles and arches, even her toes, "swirlies" with the electric toothbrush.

  After Luno spent five minutes tickle-teasing Luna's feet and calling her a "good girl" like an adorable, ticklish pet, he stopped and let Luna rest for the evening. She was close to falling asleep already, and it was only an hour and nearly forty-five minutes until bedtime. But alas, Luno smiled to his drowsy, tickled-silly little sister, tucked her in under her thick multi-layer of blankets, and pet her behind her ear. Luna smiled. She had a long day and a fun tickle torture session today. She needed some rest.

  "Goodnight, Luna. See you tomorrow."

  As he was about to walk out into the corridor to check on the other Luno Team members, Luno turned to look at Luna one more time before he headed out. He smiled.

  "Good girl."
I had this idea MONTHS ago, actually. XD I figured this is what would probably happen if I actually did not stop using up my brother's play coins in LoZ. :XD:
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shawnthewolf12's avatar
Hnnng, this is freaking adorable! cx